Her face was lit by the sudden lightening...it was during times like these when she would love to be alone...it was never a conscious effort to be alone…but she liked having her space...it was essential to her being....Strangely her mind was always preoccupied with the best and worst of the memories during these moments.....
Solitude is a bliss.....it is as essential as the pause which adds meaning to a motley group of words....time, space...lacuna, gap........and a pause.......and how she wished at times to forget 'those' times...and at other times close her eyes tightly and recall the face.....and at some odd moments.....that face would come to her, clear and heart breaking......time had stood still on that face....It was that same face which she had last seen ....when he had come to see her off......and today, even if they sat facing each other it would be near impossible to recognize that face...to make that connection....
Time had moved on......life has changed.....and with each passing day, with each new experience she was changing.....'they' were evolving....that 'something' which was 'all' for them at sometime was getting sliced by the hands of time.......and during some rare occasions when they had exchanged words........it threatened to become 'all'....but then with the passing of the moment .....it would get lost....
Finally. It was time to bid goodbye.....goodbyes are always special......'may God be with you'. And yes, sometimes when the rain drops would moisten her face....the moments would flash....lightening fast.
Solitude is a bliss.....it is as essential as the pause which adds meaning to a motley group of words....time, space...lacuna, gap........and a pause.......and how she wished at times to forget 'those' times...and at other times close her eyes tightly and recall the face.....and at some odd moments.....that face would come to her, clear and heart breaking......time had stood still on that face....It was that same face which she had last seen ....when he had come to see her off......and today, even if they sat facing each other it would be near impossible to recognize that face...to make that connection....
Time had moved on......life has changed.....and with each passing day, with each new experience she was changing.....'they' were evolving....that 'something' which was 'all' for them at sometime was getting sliced by the hands of time.......and during some rare occasions when they had exchanged words........it threatened to become 'all'....but then with the passing of the moment .....it would get lost....
Finally. It was time to bid goodbye.....goodbyes are always special......'may God be with you'. And yes, sometimes when the rain drops would moisten her face....the moments would flash....lightening fast.
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nidhi... u sure seem to have some great talents ;)
is this jus a small story or reflection of thoughts or how did u come abt writing this one??
The way u've written n the way u've expressed those.. soo nice..
thought provoking! :)
Intense!
Is everything okay? :P
Sorry. Hehe! But yeah, Intense stuff.
good way of expressing
Bahot khub.When words come from the heart,they usually flow like a river.
Stumbled on your blog while searching for the title song of daane anar ke.Read your retro post.Had written a similar post myself some months back.
http://mysticbard.blogspot.com/2005/09/golden-era.html
Anyways,it was good to read some of your posts.take care.catch ya around sometime.
PS:Felt inspired to write something n post on my blog..
Yeah !! baccha do not start thinking now...
enjoy your break...i wish you would start posting again !!
:P Everything is okay!! Thanks for the concern...*hugs*
Just posted it...do not read much into it..... ;)
Thankyou !!
Glad you liked it .. :)
Yeah....very true...and its pointless writing things otherwise...
Glad to have you here...you have a nice blog !!
Read many of your posts too....:P
Keep dropping by !!
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PS: was this fictional?
PPS: was its inspiration fictional too ?
Is this fact or fiction? If its a factual account then its beautifully captured and if its fiction then its beautifully written.
You have written it so well that I don't have words to express it. I don't know which lines to pick as the best ones because all of them are better then the next one. Loved it. Infact, I will link it as my "Pick of the week/month". I hope you don't mind.
PS: Sorry for coming after a gap. I will read your other posts too but aaram se.
:((
someone else somewhere must have written the same in her diary!
was a post in resonance with some old memories :-<
nice expression of thoughts
R we witnessing a to be Bestseller Writer??..Hope we are!! A gem of a post!
Ooh i was transported to some place that seemed sooo real. Great writing skills.
Keep the good posts coming
good one.. the words conveyed loads of meaning that they look like!
Happy Birthday!!!!
Came here via Ricky's blog..
May God bless u!!!!
Many Happy returns of the day ... (May be belated :) .....)
What do you think Ashu...??
Leave it for you to decide.....Life is a full cirle :P
And i know...many would have experienced the same...but cheerup !!
*hugs*
I am not going to say wether its factual or fictional....just that the feelings are real....
That may be vicarious or real though :P ;)
You are soo very welcome to my blog !! thankyou for choosing it as the pick of the week !!
:)
Thanks Tarun !! it was indeed an expression of thoughts at a wierd hour ....
Glad you liked it !!
welcome to my blog :)
Ohh !! now do not overwhelm me !!
I do not intend to be an author...:P Just write what i can feel :P
Thankyou for all the appreciation :*
Thankyou for the praise !!
'great writing skills' *blushing*
I write what i feel ! Do keep drooping in :)
Most welcome to my blog !!
Thanks Chandu !!
You do not drop in regularly...rather you have not been blogging regularly !!
I love to read your posts too....specially the amazing spellings *smiling*
:P :))
Thanks Neetie !!
Got to know you on Orkut too ...
I am soo delighted by all those who took time to wish me ....*hugs*
Thankyou !! :)
No PV you were on time :P
And thanks for the wishes ....and thanks for dropping by...have read you skills in scripting too :P
:))
hi nidhi.. happy bday (may be belated) came via ricky's blog..
very nice write up..
*smiles*
Thanks Gurl !!
Have read your story of 'First Crush' reappearing!! Its so wonderful :) Lucky you ;)
Welcome to my blog !